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Half-awake,late night me
rendezvous
often
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soft words, seductions, reticence
she Walks in
Calmly
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Brings a lot of cold or spring
with her, all
along
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I ask – where are you from
As if it
matters
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Is there a hungry world
waiting for
you?
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Do they hate each other
out there
still?
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We mate, rejuvenate
I & night
wind
On Meeting the bar, Victoria has us write Tilus. Read more about this interesting form here.
as if it matters….smiles…i like that one…true…ha
the mating with the night wind as well…cool touch
the question ones though are def thought provoking…
Like the relationship between you and night/moon. Nice and pensive ones here.
like this rendezvous with night….
all of them well woven abhra… those two touched me esp. though..
I ask – where are you from
As if it
matters
#
Is there a hungry world
waiting for
you?
i think there’s always someone hungry around us… physically or mentally and if we can give them what they need..what a blessing
Brilliant! Night wind is so often the only one answering.
Is there a hungry world
waiting for
you?
#
Do they hate each other
out there
still?
#
I the question marks add so much to your poetry..
the hate – still – rings so true – with all the waste that emotion brings.
Ha…this was very interesting with a touch of whimsy.
A wonderful set here, Abhra. And so very, very thought-provoking!
I love the set, specially the first and last one ~ Have a wonderful weekend ~
Brilliant… tryst with the night…
Of late I’ve seen many poets are coming up with this form..Tilus…a nice one it looks…though I’m still to try my skill with it..